Character Application for AvataRPG: Chin the Conqueror
Hey, this is Minnichi trying out for the role of Chin in the wonderful AvataRPG production! This scene ended up...a lot longer than I expected lol. So sorry if it drags :X I tried to make it from Chin's point of view since he's my character of choice. Here we go!
General Chin leaned silently against one of the massive, time-worn pillars surrounding the Royal Palace. His sharp brown eyes scanned the surrounding crowd disapprovingly – or rather, returned the disapproving glares. He could already read all their thoughts flashing across their ignorant faces. They were wondering what he, of all people, was doing in a high general’s uniform…he, who fell beneath average height. There was no other reason for their disapproval.
His whole life, he’d prov…
FRS Test Review of Avatar: Energy Saga
Hi all, Minnichi putting together a test review here. Before I start, here's an overview of my approach:
Writing and Character Development are heavily stressed. In my opinion, writing is by far the most important element of them all. A plot may start off simple and unoriginal, but writing with a carefully planned and sophisticated approach will bring any story far. Character development brings emotions alive, allowing readers to become attached to the protagonists (created or not). Combined, writing and character development therefore become more powerful than originality because we're able to see and feel everything the characters do. We understand them, and no matter how cliche their problems are, we sympathize with them, and we want to see…