Fanon Review: Suki's Story by Agent Slash
signing on this fine Monday evening. So I took the SAT on Saturday (which, fun fact, also spells UR SAT day) and that's why I got behind on my review--anytime where I had enough time to sit down that I would have spent reading, I spent studying. But now it's done and I have time! Yay!
Today's review is a completed fanon, by . It follows Suki on... adventures. Ummm... I really hate to say this in a review Slash will probably read, but Suki irritates the heck out of me, still irritates the heck out of me, and will probably always irritate the heck out of me. I could go on, but I'm choosing not to. I just felt that it was necessary to point out my bias before continuing.
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Fanon Review: Together by Fruipit
MibuWolf here for a rather simplistic review. I don't believe in assessing poetry as I might other writing, but here I go.
Today, I'm taking a look at by , which is a poem about two brothers...
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- 4 Overall Opinion
Looking at the structure of this poem, it has pretty clear alterations between short, fragmented sentences and longer sentences. There is no apparent rhyming scheme, nor pattern to the alterations between sentence lengths. For the most part, Together is the epitome of a free-form poem: I can literally see no apparent typical structure nor pattern to the structure of the poem, thus it just kind of flows as I'm sure the author's mind flowed while he was writing it. Yada yada things you'd discuss in an Engl…
Fanon review: Avatar: Shattered Balance by Kamigati
here~
Today, I'm reviewing by . This takes place a long while after the war, in a totally new but not much more developed Avatar society. With Samurai. Do you hear that? Yeah? That's the sound of my inner Shounen fangirl flipping out.
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- 4 Overall Score: 8.0... B-
- Mistakes/Grammar: 7.4 Murrrrr... Largely, the grammar was solid with a few excessive commas. But Kamigati made effective use of my ultimate pet peeve. One of my ultimate pet peeves. Excessive all caps mixed. It's okay every now and again, but in excess it's just kind of irksome in writing. All caps sounds like you're shouting, and sometimes Kamigati just wanted to put an emphasis on something, so he put it in all caps. It…
Fanon Review: Elements of Life by Typhoonmaster
here for a rather late review. So here's my rationalization: yesterday I broke my toe--I didn't have to go to the hospital or anything, I just didn't feel like writing a review with a stinging pain in my foot -coughs nervously while avoiding the fact that yesterday was already five days late-
by is a different sort of fanon than anything else I've ever seen, featuring several one-shots which each detail and describe various emotions everyone experiences throughout their lives.
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- 4 Overall Score: 9.5... A
- Mistakes/Grammar: 9.8 I wanted to give a ten! -Shakes fist and weeps- But there were some awkward "then"s. It might have only been in "Rumination" but the "then"s were used inco…
Fanon Review: The Kyoshi Chronicles by Kyoshidude
here. I like sleep.
Today, I'm reviewing by . You have one guess as to what it's about. If you guessed "Kyoshi", then you're wrong. Just kidding, you're right.
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- 4 Overall Score: 7.9... C+
- Mistakes/Grammar: 6.6 For the most part, the grammar was very good. However, I couldn't help but notice the awkward punctuation errors and runons and such.
- General Writing: 7.0 I don't know how else to put this, but China called and they want their wall back. I think I'd put this in general writing: the paragraphs are not very well divided. There are some really short paragraphs, and then the next one takes up my whole screen. It makes it very daunting and difficult to read, which is not the best.…