Fanon Review: The Lost Scrolls by RuleroftheBisons97
signing on after making the upsetting realization a few days ago that I need to get 126% on my AP Chem final to get an A T^T (why I didn't get this done sooner)
Today, I'm reviewing by , which follows the story of the Gaang after the war searching for some special scrolls, as well as several other subplots.
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- 4 Overall Score: 6.9... D+
- Mistakes/Grammar: 7.8 There were some mildly confusing sentences which I assume are caused by typos, as well as some overly-wordiness that made the grammar used in correct. However, aside from this the grammar was pretty accurate.
- General Writing: 6.0 I don't particularly like onomatopoeias, and there were quite a few used rather excessively. Aside fr…
Fanon Review: Landslide by Fruipit
signing on to review a fanon that reminds me of health class Freshman year -cough-
by is a fanon following a troubled relationship between two old friends...
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- 4 Overall Score: 8.4... B
- Mistakes/Grammar: 8.8 I noticed a fair amount of comma splicing, which is where two complete sentences are separated by a comma. However, aside from this there weren't any majorly jarring grammatical or otherwise mistakes.
- General Writing: 8.5 For how emotional of an idea this is, I never really got the full "wow" that a plot as deep as this deserves. I could tell Fruipit was putting effort into doing so, but I just never really felt moved by the descriptions, which is integral in such a short piec…
Fanon Review: Heiress of the Nile by Lady Lostris
signing on this fine December day.
Today, I'll be reviewing by , which follows the story of soon-to-be Fire Lady Lostris and some other people as well in an Egyptian-like Avatar verse. While reading this fanon, I had some very conflicting opinions. Honestly, though, I feel like my end opinion was that it was a little tiny bit disappointing for how much hype it had gotten. Now, I feel like I should take off my thick-rimmed black hipster glasses (which I do wear...) before continuing, but when something is really popular, I expect it to be really good. And if it slips up at all, I kind of have a tendency to slam on it...
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- 4 Overall Score: 9.1... A-
- Mistakes/Grammar: 9.0 There are s…
Fanon Review: Avatar: Into the Light by Agent Slash
here. I've finally gotten around to really delving into my own fanon writing, but as a result this review was late D:
Today, I'm looking at by . It's a sequel to Suki's Story, which confused me at first since I try not to look at the main page's plot synopsis when I'm reviewing...
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- 4 Overall Score: 7.5... C
- Mistakes/Grammar: 8.2 Commas oh my god. There were a handful of other mistakes, but the overdose on commas was most distracting...
- General Writing: 8.0 The writing has improved since the last fanon I reviewed of his, but it still just feels rather stiff to me. Some of the descriptions sound forced, but they're there and overall the writing is a lot more interesting than I felt i…
Fanon Review: The Lost Air Temple by kuzonkid7
signing on today. I would have gotten this review sooner, but last week was hectic, to say the least. Not a single night where I got more than four hours of sleep :( But now I'm well-rested and re-organized!
Today, I'm reviewing by . The story follows the adventures of an Avatar before Aang named Gatton in his adventures and quest. Per the author's request, I am mostly focusing on Book Two.
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- 4 Overall Score: 6.2... D-
- Mistakes/Grammar: 5.9 I find it rather interesting that the fanons with the most editors seem to have the most mistakes. It seems rather counter-intuitive, wouldn't you say? Yet somehow typos like "mourning" instead of "morning" and other foolish mistakes would seep…