Just wanted to say that you're a cool guy and I wish to get to know better. Also, I just started a new fanon about th next avatar and I hope you could give me feedback from a fanonbending master: Chapter 1: New Cycle, Part 1.
P.D. I love your Slashverse Fanon and also I ship Sukka, Suki will be mentioned in my story.
Hey, man! First off, thank you for the kind words, and secondly, I just read the chapter and I must say, I like where the story is going so far. I also like how Asami joined the White Lotus. That was a nice touch. Some advice I would give in order to improve your writing is to really describe what the characters are feeling. Hikar in particular, seeing as how he's the protagonist. As you're writing, take the time to get in the characters' heads and describe their thoughts and emotions towards what's going on. I've never been great at giving advice, so I hope this was useful to you in some way!