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Guard the peace at all costs.
This chapter, Ursa's Story, appears in Avatar: Guardian, a series created and written by The Bos. Please leave a review if you enjoyed the chapter. |
I loved it I wish this was a real episode it is awesome! I am glad it is my first chapter I have read. Courage the Cowardly User (talk • contribs) 21:36, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
^^Ahh memories...back when I was a noob.Avatar Courage
18:35, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
WOW, that was excellent stuff Bos. The chosen ancestor of Toph was definitely likely. I really like how your brought out Ursa's caring for both of her children by having her worry about both Zuko and Azula. I thought it was very clever how you made Aang bow to Ursa in the middle of the conversation because thats something I could definitely see Aang doing. Keep up the great work you get: ***** (Five Stars)
Windsword7 (talk • contribs) 14:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC) From the ashes a fire shall be woken Windsword7
I like how you integrated Sud into the story. He's not mentioned very much, and I think it's cool how you thought that Sud could be Toph's ancestor. Nice work Bos. Evatar114 (talk • contribs) 15:21, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
That was great!!! I loved how Sud was in there!!! WHO'S THE AIRBENDING MASTER??!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?! -- Dudewaldo4 My Userpage!!! • yada yada yada... • My stories 16:17, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
As usual, fantastical!
It's getting hard to comment on these stories without devolving into fanboyish gibberish, but,
OMG!!!!AVATAR: GUARDIAN IZ TEH CRACK ROCKZEZEZZZZZ TO MAH SOULZZZZ!
That is all. PiEman (talk • contribs) 17:50, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the compliments guys. I was thinking of nominating it for Featured Article. Would you support it? --I'm The Bos - Got something to say? - Read Guardian! 19:07, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Sure! I love Guardian, and this is a really good chapter.Evatar114 (talk • contribs) 20:28, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks so much for giving me the chance to be the first to review Ursa's Story using my maximum level of observance was totally worth it and I would definitely support it. Windsword7 (talk • contribs) 22:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC) From the ashes a fire shall be woken Windsword7
- If you want to vote, it's up for voting here. Thanks! --I'm The Bos - Got something to say? - Read Guardian! 04:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
Ursa!!!!!!! :DDDD I'd been wondering what the heck happened to her lol. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. Zuko's reaction to his mother's return is understandable, but for some reason feels a little corny to me. But it was interesting to know that Ursa is interested in helping Azula! Hope you build on that ;D. Good job! Idk how to vote for this article, so feel free to edit this post to support it.Themuffinrox (talk • contribs) 00:08, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
That was.... AWESOME!!!!!!! Awww, Ursa really does care about Azula, too. The only part I found just a bit wierd was that Ursa was totally unaware of recent events, it's not like she's been hiding under a rock for the past few years. But anyways, THAT WAS SO AMAZING! -- Stormfire (talk • contribs) 01:58, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
- I personally would think that Zuko would keep the news of his fight with Azula (and her current condition) under close protection. So, Ursa, being in Gaoling on the other side of the world, wouldn't hear about it. Thanks for reviewing though! Could you vote for it? --I'm The Bos - Got something to say? - Read Guardian! 02:01, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
I personally didn't like it. I didn't hate it but it wasn't anything special. I'm sorry. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JadeRaymond (talk • contribs). This note was added on 04:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC).
- Sorry to hear it. Oh well. --I'm The Bos - Talk - Guardian 02:44, August 20, 2010 (UTC)