Frankly, this is amazing. I loved the battle between Toph and Bumi, since I agreed that they would have an epic showdown. Toph would totally cheat in the Pai Sho game too. Nice work. Definitely FA material.--I'm The Bos - Got something to say? - Read Guardian! 21:39, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
I literaly have no words to describe how great this chapter is. Fantastic is being modest, can't wait to see what else you have in store.--Twilitlink 04:07, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
Wow, that was one of the most well-written stories I have ever read. It definitely had more the feel of a professionally written novel than a fan story. Looking forward to the next installment. -- Stormfire 01:42, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
This is a great story of Toph's adventure after the War. I love the references to foaming mouth guy and the cabbage merchant.