Yay! It's out! Tell me what you thought, cuz I'm dying to know... Evatar114 
23:20, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
So...Awesome...Must...have...more...Fight Scenes! The Crimson Dragon 23:56, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
Loved it!!! The Saiyan - Talk 00:04, August 30, 2010 (UTC) P.S Carloso what is that Sprite?
- ) Glad you liked it. Evatar114 23:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Your fight sequence is brilliantly written. I can see it form in my mind's eye right in front of me. Beautifully done... I have to admit though, I was a little confused every now and again as I'm trying to figure out whose point of view you're writing in.... MightyBrit has left this comment! (Talk, Read CoD!) 03:09, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! Sorry for the confusion. I try to make it clear as you read it, but sometimes even I get lost. Evatar114 14:07, September 5, 2010 (UTC)