| "I didn't choose to be the Avatar! So why should I!"
This chapter, A New Land, appears in Rise of an Avatar, a series created and written by Carloso. Please leave a review if you enjoyed the chapter. |
Was fun to read, some grammar errors here and there, but nothing too bad. Is shinn dead now? Or are you going to continue the story? 86.81.214.90 19:22, August 24, 2010 (UTC)Tuxedo
Yeah I already have, (Tensions) read it and review! Carloso (talk • contribs) 19:24, August 24, 2010 (UTC)